GROUP MEETING
Hey blog! Today my teacher made groups of 6 with the purpose of creating feedback on each of our projects process that we’ve done and also to give ideas on other things we can do to our projects. As a group we decided to create a Microsoft Word document where each classmate shared their blog postings link and talked about what their project’s plot. We also wrote some comments for each classmate so we all could improve.
Here is a picture of all of us working on the word document.
This is what the entire document ended in:
Genre: Thriller
Setting to film: Park, or any house
Plot: Not sure about idea yet, has a couple options. Like relaxing at his house after a long day of work and he goes about his day. He then gets a phone call from a mysterious person, once he answers the voice says, “YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP! WAKE UP NOW BEFORE...” and then the man wakes up.
Critique-Nicholas: Overall, solid idea, try to add more detail and make longer though.
Genre: Horror/Psychological Thriller
As of Monday, my group does not know what we are going to do but we have some ideas and some films we are inspired by.
Plot #1: One idea was a zombie apocalypse with 2 survivors in a forest running away from a monster on a dark, foggy night and they stop running after a couple seconds thinking they escaped. The 2 survivors start walking with the map they got of the park and then they suddenly hear the sound of something breaking but don’t think much of it. They suddenly hear a monster creeping up onto them and the scene would end with the zombie on top of the person about to eat them.
Critique: -Gabe, minimal running. Running is boring, no one wants to see running. Terrible idea.
Some films I am inspired by films like the shining, Halloween, and jaws as I really enjoyed these movies and would want to be created something like this
Genre: Thriller
Plot: A godzilla inspired film, given by Stoklosa due to the fact that our group had no idea what to do. The setting takes place in a dark forest (Mark and park), story dynamic may be derived from Jurassic Park (T. Rex Escape scene) and how science will be humanities un-doing (Life finds a way) Take the new Jurassic world rebirth trailer for example, the new abnormality that is the main focus is a dinosaur called D-Rex/Deformed Rex (Image below)
This can be a mirroring towards my film as my monster escapes from containment as scientists got too full of themselves and thought they had full control over the monster. (That is all the information as of now)
Plot: The main character is a girl who is very isolated and doesn't have a lot of friends, so when the last day of school ends, she goes directly home to find no one there either. During her car ride home, we want some non-diegetic music in the background and start the credit sequence until she goes into her room and closes the blinds, and the title appears. When the camera pans into the bed, the girl is going to be writing in her diary until her mom comes into her room and takes her out for some ice cream.
Genre: Thriller & Coming of Age
We don't have any title yet
Setting: At the beach during the sunset
Plot: A girl who just turned 21 and went to the beach to drink and celebrate her birthday with some people who she thought were her friends; (There's also a scene where she is in the car with her friends getting to the beach) she gets really drunk and one of her friends takes a picture of her lying on the sand and posts it online. The picture becomes viral, and her parents found out that she was in a bad state and no one was helping her.
Critique- Beatrice: I think your movie examples are good but maybe you should offer more analysis and responses with depth. This way you can learn more about how to use things and what to add into your opening. Maybe try to research more recently produced films, to have better examples.
-Plot: A girl gets cursed and is watched by a killer, she is trying to break the curse. The curse feeds on depression and can be broken with happiness and love. She is depressed because her mom passed away a while ago and ever since her dad has been taking out his anger on her, making their house unsafe and their relationship weak. When she gets cursed, we see a tattoo appear on her, its matching with the killer. The title will be seen when she's looking at herself in the mirror, distraught, after being cursed.
-Setting: house of the family
Critique- Santina: develop how she got the curse with a flashback
Gabe: add more depth on the curse
The other classmates gave me an idea for my project where I could edit a scene and what apps I can use in order to make it really nice. Also, I gave a suggestion to my classmate Santina of a location where she could film one of her main scenes.
In conclusion I think this activity was very gratifying to all of us. I got to improve some important aspects of my project and I had other points of view from my classmates on things I could add to make it better.